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just uploaded a song its called day dream..i'm feeling it but its a rough draft and just been recording it a bit today...PLEASE give any any feedback on it lyrics weird where you think im off time voice weird etc... any suggestions etc. would be greatly apreciated! thx !
OK...1st...be careful what you ask for.
2nd... I like the 2nd verse better than the 1st.
Alright
Tap the lightpole and we'll be jammin all night
And ain't nobody callin' the cops
'Cause everybody's here freakin', if they're older they're doin the rock
And every block from all around
Comes runnin' to the park when they hear the sound
And soon the word's spreadin' through our part of town
"Yo, 40 Park y'all, Jam-On's gettin down"
Yeah...
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heh i freestyled the 2nd one...and used just one other multi track on it. go figure compared to writing and using 3
Yes... go figure...
Alright
Tap the lightpole and we'll be jammin all night
And ain't nobody callin' the cops
'Cause everybody's here freakin', if they're older they're doin the rock
And every block from all around
Comes runnin' to the park when they hear the sound
And soon the word's spreadin' through our part of town
"Yo, 40 Park y'all, Jam-On's gettin down"
Yeah...
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