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    Poetry

    flowering, poetic from the floetic.

    Come on speak your mind and speak your soul,
    to find you whole.

    Just let your poems flow.

    And please fill this thread.

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    Floetic poems from one who flowers...
    Like life is, fragrance so sweet yet poison to me...
    Round and round the wheels go constantly
    As I sit in permanent contemplation of the blessed sights I've seen
    Have many to go, but I really don't know...
    Tell me, seems like you have great gifts for words or maybe I'm just hopeful
    Floetic Poetic words can heal my dilemma...
    Or empty sounds will vibrate my frustrated soul!!
    Only thing worse than failure is not trying

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    And we welcome another artist to the site,
    It's easy to do 'cause it feels so right,
    Welcome to our forum where we're all so tight (most times),
    Creative thinking is always welcome...


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    I love the summer months!

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    hehehe...why does this remind me of the Louis/Justafan fiasco...

    welcome welcome floetic

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    Damn ya'll fuhq'n up da flizzo
    Only thing worse than failure is not trying

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chief
    hehehe...why does this remind me of the Louis/Justafan fiasco...

    welcome welcome floetic
    Heheheh...you noticed it too? Why do you think I haven't posted in this thread, heheheh...err...whoops!
    Alright
    Tap the lightpole and we'll be jammin all night
    And ain't nobody callin' the cops
    'Cause everybody's here freakin', if they're older they're doin the rock
    And every block from all around
    Comes runnin' to the park when they hear the sound
    And soon the word's spreadin' through our part of town
    "Yo, 40 Park y'all, Jam-On's gettin down"
    Yeah...

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    O.G. Chuk Master of the Universe

    Quote Originally Posted by Cozymandias
    Heheheh...you noticed it too? Why do you think I haven't posted in this thread, heheheh...err...whoops!
    Was I around? I hate it when ya'll refer to things I don't know about!!! I think I recall... Not sure... I thought I was an O.G. here!!
    Only thing worse than failure is not trying

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    Nah, you weren't here yet. In fact, you came in just as we were recovering from it.
    Alright
    Tap the lightpole and we'll be jammin all night
    And ain't nobody callin' the cops
    'Cause everybody's here freakin', if they're older they're doin the rock
    And every block from all around
    Comes runnin' to the park when they hear the sound
    And soon the word's spreadin' through our part of town
    "Yo, 40 Park y'all, Jam-On's gettin down"
    Yeah...

    Jam-On Productions:Website Forum

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    Speaking of... Where is Justa? Is it in the archive folder.. I'd love to educate myself on the history of the drama... Before Chuk!!

    I guess flizzo'n has gone out da window!!

    HE-MAN!!
    Only thing worse than failure is not trying

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    I love the summer months!

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    *smiles just a bit* "You had me at hello"

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    That was great... You guys ROCK!!! I mean very cool...
    Only thing worse than failure is not trying

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chukwuka
    That was great... You guys ROCK!!! I mean very cool...
    Here here; that was a fun read.
    The Father's letter is for you. His ways are higher than ours. It takes time to grow a seed and bear good fruit. Rebuke the devourer. The battle is the Lord's and He will be victorious.


    If that makes me crazy then that's okay.
    Reverence for the Father and his instructions outweighs all else.
    In all directions, love one another give us grace for agreement with Your will.
    Leaving all else behind us.
    I love you God; show me the real truth not idols.
    Pleading the blood on life and the world all over.
    so be it.

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    Alright, I'ma try to write something:

    I'm feeling really small standing in the proximity
    Of all these minds that can write verse of such sublimity
    People who, with paper anvil and quill hammer, can forge
    Everyday words into keen-edged, beautiful swords
    That can lay my heart open, and as it's cloven in two
    I feel envious pain, but also a strange new
    Desire to create, to expand my frontiers,
    I want to write pretty too, and stand up with my peers.
    But as this novice poetry probably shows,
    I'm best off thus far keeping my words in prose.
    But I'll evolve and develop although I'm now small,
    And one day, I might just hold a candle to y'all.
    "What, Wheeljak? You fell in that open manhole?
    How is that possible?
    I posted 'CAUTION: OPEN MANHOLE' on my Facebook page!"

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    sounds like you're there to me, bro... nicely done.
    I love the summer months!

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    Love the verbage

    Quote Originally Posted by Wheeljak
    Alright, I'ma try to write something:

    I'm feeling really small standing in the proximity
    Of all these minds that can write verse of such sublimity
    People who, with paper anvil and quill hammer, can forge
    Everyday words into keen-edged, beautiful swords
    That can lay my heart open, and as it's cloven in two
    I feel envious pain, but also a strange new
    Desire to create, to expand my frontiers,
    I want to write pretty too, and stand up with my peers.
    But as this novice poetry probably shows,
    I'm best off thus far keeping my words in prose.
    But I'll evolve and develop although I'm now small,
    And one day, I might just hold a candle to y'all.
    Yeah, I second...
    Love the verbage...
    Only thing worse than failure is not trying

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    Thanks for the encouraging words, y'all!
    It's my first poem! Well, technically it's not, but it is the first I've ever written because I wanted to, rather than because I had to if I didn't wanna get an F.
    "What, Wheeljak? You fell in that open manhole?
    How is that possible?
    I posted 'CAUTION: OPEN MANHOLE' on my Facebook page!"

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    I dont know about y'all...but that sucked donkey balls...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chief
    I dont know about y'all...but that sucked donkey balls...
    Chief, I think that's the nicest think you've ever said to me! <snif>
    "What, Wheeljak? You fell in that open manhole?
    How is that possible?
    I posted 'CAUTION: OPEN MANHOLE' on my Facebook page!"

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